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Submitted on January 19, 2011

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Comments:

Martin Zvonár

Beautiful girl, beauitful pose and very nice light :)

Posted 8 years ago   

Steve Peters  

Thank you Martin...you might see she is one of my favorite models..

Posted 8 years ago   

Peter Prazenka

NIce shot. But there is some things in the picture what can be improved. Firstly is that spot on left side of her head, secondly is that nice earring, when you look to the picture it is looks like there is something from her nose or like light house somewhere behind. After study you find that is an earring.
And last. if you have second flash and white umbrella you can light the foreground as well. On this angle will be much better to not have that dark line there. Just my opinion.

Posted 8 years ago   

Raymond Wong

I agree with Peter. Nice shot. I find the little mountain on the right and the clutter (could of been cleaned up) in the foreground a bit distracting in relation to the smoothness of the model. Just a bit off balance in my opinion. But good work.

Posted 8 years ago   

Steve Peters  

Thank you Peter & Raymond for your comments. I must admit Peter this was nar the end of the shoot with light fading tide coming in. I had another flash and an umbrella in my kit so wa s a bit lazy bit will ceratinly try your suggestion. Raymond I did no editing and the beach was littered with debri from recent floods in area we did try to remove most of the rubbish, Thank you both for your suggestions.

Posted 8 years ago   

1/60

f8

ISO: 200

Focal Length

50mm

Exposure Bias

0

Camera

1000D

Lights Used

Regular Flash
Strobe
Natural Light

Category

Portrait

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